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Jonah's Torment by OmriKoresh Jonah's Torment by OmriKoresh

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Jonah in the belly of the beast (:

100x150cm (47x59 inch)
Oil on canvas

i hope you like! (:

Repunzle by OmriKoresh Sleeping Beauty by OmriKoresh Beauty and the beast by OmriKoresh Ariels by OmriKoresh Litchi Girl by OmriKoresh The Pied Piper by OmriKoresh 
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Given 2014-08-12
The suggester says: "Stellar sense of lighting. Fantastic job with a simple composition, so the eye moves steadily through the picture."

Jonah's Torment by OmriKoresh ( Suggested by neurotype and Featured by STelari )
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Overall, I think this piece is fantastic. I like that you use a man as the subject, since (as others have said) men aren't often portrayed in art in this way. Your eye for detail is incredible and use of textures in the stones, body hair, and flowing liquid are all very well done.

My only real critique is that there are two points where the body proportions seem a little off (and these are made obvious because the rest of the piece is so good).
-The first is his left shoulder, which seems too far from his neck/torso to have the rounded look you give it. Either the shoulder itself needs to be closer to the body or farther back into the liquid, or the shoulder socket/ joint (and resultant deltoid muscle) needs to be moved further up the arm into position.
-The second oddity is his left foot, which appears either swollen or awkwardly foreshortened. In its given angle, the heel of the foot would either be under the liquid or obscured by the foot in front of it and it looks as though you tried to include more than should be visible. The same is said for the fleshy 'ball' of the foot which should continue in a steady slope toward the back of the foot (out of sight).

Other than these two minor issues, great job.
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saveworld Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014  Student Artist
Excellent work..
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nikkita91 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014
The whole image flows together beautifully, great job.
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scaryren Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
lovely
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FrankForte Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Professional Filmographer
nice!
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meiyue Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student General Artist
Congratulations on the DD! :love: 

Have a nice day :iconlainloveplz:
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Tenshi-no-Kanashimi Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
This is fantastic! So much emotion and movement, emotion in motion?
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pearwood Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
In the depths of the sea.  Beautiful.
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AgonizingSwordfish Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats on the DD! :)
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kopljar Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very expressive! I love the body position and the way the water compliments him.
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TheWeeLad Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
this is quite good
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Xumaeris Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014   Traditional Artist
HOLY F*** ..What?

your facebook fan page, here i come
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KahlaWolf Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cool!!! :D
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blanket86 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Very interesting and beautiful work! Great conception. Congratulations! :-) (Smile)
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
I’m very happy for you!!! :iconloveloveplz: :tighthug:
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OmriKoresh Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
thanks!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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OmriKoresh Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
read first.
then read what you wrote.
that's my response.
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KevinTinholt Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
Ooh it's traditional. Never mind, you have my respect.
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beachelf Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
:iconcongratsplz: on the DD! :woohoo:
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zJoriz Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
Traditional art?? HOW?? :jawdrop:
Looks more than just pro. Amazing work.
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pufflemon Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student General Artist
that water is outstanding 
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NonieR Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
You do great work!

I'd love to see you add a few more category folders for your art--for examples, Sculpture/Objects, Vampires, Fairy Tales--so we can look at themes in one place. It's easier to enjoy, say, steampunk objects without being distracted by Anne Rice vampires, and vice versa. But that's up to you, of course.

Congratulations on the well-earned DD!
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OmriKoresh Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
hey you were totally right, i added what you recommended thanks!
if you have any more suggestions then you are welcome to help, i'm not very good at that sort of thing...
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NonieR Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014
Thanks! And I love your newest cover--gorgeous and ominous at the same time!

--Nonie
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OmriKoresh Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Professional General Artist
i figured that it's way too confusing to people actually,
i'll do a poll and ask if my watchers would prefer categories,
thanks for the input.
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gamebalance Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
nice sci-fi
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Dragondud Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
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oO-Monkey-Oo Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist
Rare to see a man in this kind of piece, nicely done. 
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